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全能五星范文新鲜出炉啦!有家长爆料称今年全能五星的范文竟然是往年的初三题?接下来就附上对比!
2017全能五星五年级范文
(来源学而思英语学科组)
话题作文:One change I wish to have in my family
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One change I wish to have in my family
by Antonio
Speaking of my family, a word “happiness” always comes to my mind. However, in this busy modern city, our family life would be better if we had a more healthy lifestyle, which is one change I wish to have in my family.
Here are the reasons. First of all, a healthy life style will do good to our work and study. Eating nutritious food helps the brain work efficiently. In addition,a healthy life style will make us energetic.We can keep fit by doing exercise every day. What’s more, a healthy lifestyle can make our family more united, for it may take great efforts to change some bad habits of the past and to develop new ones with the endeavor of the whole family.
Hard as it may be, I firmly believe that our family life will be better if we are determined to live a healthy lifestyle. And I want to make this ‘wish’ real with my family together.往年初三题范文
I always want to have a pet dog in my family since I like animals very much. Dogs are very cute and it’s nice to pick them up and hold them in my arms. If I have a pet dog, I can learn to be more responsible. I have to feed them and play with them, even take care of them at night. What’s more, I can also learn about life and death from keeping a pet dog. I can learn how to care for others and how to respect all living things. I’d like to discuss it with my parents and I hope my dream will come true in the end.
I am the only child in my family and I usually feel lonely. I always dream to have a younger sister one day. If I have a younger sister, I will not feel lonely any longer. I will help my parents look after her, which will make me more independent. When my parents get old, we can share responsibility to take care of them. I’d like to discuss it with my parents and I hope my dream will come true in the end.
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